I wrote my first Erotic Shortstory and I would love some feedback!
My first language isn’t English so please bear with me if there are some mistakes.. I hope you’ll enjoy it, I know I enjoyed writing it ;)
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Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/9wcxl7/misty_night_in_berlin_wrote_my_first_erotic
Have you got a link to the original? This is completely impossible to read in night mode.