Almost [BDSM] [Light Whipping] [MF]

This is my first ever erotic short (or erotic anything) I’ve written. I was told to post it somewhere so here I am! Let me know what you think

“I could get used to this” she thought, as she felt the tickle of the feathers gently caressing her hard nipples. It was her first time, but something about her hands being tied to the bed while wearing the yellow lacy panties she picked out turned her on in a way she couldn’t explain. Her thoughts were quickly interrupted by a sharp crack and a harsh stinging sensation.

She didn’t know it was coming, the soft blindfolds kept her in complete mystery, the anticipation is part of what made it so fucking sexy. She felt hands gently exploring her body as they made their way down to her panty line.

Another crack. More stinging. She felt her panties being peeled off and her wet pussy was now completely exposed. She felt breathing and gentle kissing on the insides of her thighs. She was going crazy. She felt pinching on her nipples and they responded by getting even perkier than they already were.

Breath on her pussy now. She could feel how wet she was. The tongue surprised her. She felt that tongue skillfully dance over her clit. There were hands on her thighs, pulling her closer to the mouth that was pleasing her. Again, she felt one hand on each breast, and she felt the warm mouth press into her even more. She was in heaven, she could definitely get used to this—even with the pain. A little pain never hurt anybody she thought.

Her hips started to gyrate as she came closer and closer to orgasm. The hands were gone now. She felt a finger on her chin and opened her mouth and wrapped her lips around it. She felt what she assumed to be the same finger gently enter her pussy, but the mouth never left. God she loved how that tongue felt. She was getting close. She was breathing heavy.
The combination of the finger and the tongue brought her right to the edge of what she wanted. And then nothing. Just one last crack and more stinging. “Maybe I should’ve been more obedient today” she thought as she felt the ropes loosen.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/9dvwdn/almost_bdsm_light_whipping_mf