I’m new to this subreddit, and I haven’t quite figured out what I’d like to get out of it. What I know is that I really enjoy writing short stories for women, and having them tell me how much it turned them on. There’s very little that compares to the thought of being able to get a woman off with just my words.
So, a bit about myself – I’ve written about 10 stories over the course of the last 5 years – mostly for long-distance ex-gfs, and occasionally for random girls I’ve met online. All of my stories were written spontaneously on Skype, based on a theme, set, and setting that the girl felt like having an erotic story written about. I am by no means an experienced writer, and I have a lot to work on in terms of the overall flow and coherence of my stories. I particularly struggle with setting the background of the story, dialogues between characters, and the ending. My dialogues seem to come of a bit too mundane and sometimes cheesy (for me anyway).
However, I’m better at going into the details of the sexual acts in the story (which is what really drives me to write), and I’d like to get even better at it. I particularly enjoy going into the details of foreplay, as I think that this is the most versatile and descriptive part of sex. The actual fucking is pretty repetitive (literally), and therefore does not lend itself to much description. I also feel that, in the context of an erotic story, most of the excitement in reading a story comes from the build-up. I do however want to work on my ability to give detailed descriptions of the actual sex too, which is something I’m not currently great at, because I tend to wrap up the sex bit pretty soon (in comparison to the foreplay bit), for the lack of an ability to go into detailed descriptions.
To wrap up, I guess I’d like to have more opportunities to write erotic stories for a girl that would really appreciate reading it – bonus points if you’re a good writer too! Below is the first erotic story I wrote. It’s quite an innocent one. Haha. Trust me, I’ve got a lot naughtier since ;) Enjoy!
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You’re a commerce student in my university and we do a common course together, although we haven’t really spoken to each other before. It’s in the afternoon and you’re in the habit of going to a park near the campus just to blow off steam every day. Today is a rather gloomy day and the park is relatively quiet – not many people to be seen around. You appreciate your privacy quite a bit so you have no problem with the desolation. Today in particular, you want to be alone because you recently bought a new novel written by Nora Roberts, an author who is well known for her erotic stories.
You carry the book and your back pack to your usual spot – an oak tree near a lake at one end of the park. You lay your bag down and rest your head against the tree and begin to read from chapter one. As you continue reading, you begin to realise that suppressing your sexual urges out here in public is going to get increasingly difficult. You’re wearing a skirt that reaches just above your knees. Underneath, you feel your soft cotton panties tightly wrapped over your pussy, which you can feel is getting slightly wet.
By the time you get to the end of chapter two, you feel the urge to part your legs a bit and discreetly place your left hand between your thighs. However, just as you’re about to do that, you hear someone approaching you from your right, and you glance across the lawn to see me walking towards you. You immediately bring your already-spread legs together, but that doesn’t prevent me from getting a glimpse of your cute white panties.
Me: “Hey! I know you from Economics don’t I? How’s it going?”
You: “Oh! I knew I recognized you from somewhere. I’m alright thanks, and yourself?”
Me: “I’m great, just taking a stroll in the park before I head back home. What are you reading there?”
You’re slightly embarrassed to tell me that it’s an erotic novel, so you give me the author’s name instead – “Uhmmm, it’s Nora Roberts’ new novel.”
Me: “Oh! haha I’ve read it already”
You: “Ohh…” (pleasantly surprised, and blushing slightly)
Me: “Wait this might be a coincidence but isn’t it somewhere around Chapter 3 where the girl is in a park and she has an exciting sexual experience with a stranger?”
You: “Uhmm yeah I’m just about to read that part actually” (blushing intensely now)
Me: “Oh! Haha ok.”
(I pause for a bit and squirm slightly)
Me: “Uhm, so I know we just met, so this is a total shot in the dark, haha. But I have an idea.”
You: “Mhmm?” (still blushing, but quite curious about what I have to say)
Me: “There’s a boat house not too far away from here – it’s abandoned and no one really goes there these days. Why don’t you let me take you there, and you and I can perhaps re-enact what happens to the girl in the book?”
You’re in a highly aroused state already from reading your novel. The thought of having a sexual encounter with a guy you just met makes you nervous at first, but you soon start to get excited by the thought. After a moment of consideration, you shyly agree.
On our way to the boat house, I playfully comment, “Hey by the way, when I was approaching you, I couldn’t help but get a glimpse of your white panties and your hand between your thighs – were you touching yourself before that?”
You: (blushing again) “Haha, I was about to, but I have a feeling this is going to be much better.”
We enter the boat house and it seems pretty obviously abandoned – creaky floorboards, an old boat tied at the peer, and the boat’s sails are folded and stacked in one corner of the boat house. The stack is about knee high. I sit you down on the stack and sit right beside you.
I slowly lean towards you and kiss you on the side of your neck leading my way up to your earlobe. I gently nibble on your earlobe and then kiss you moving toward your lips. When I reach your lips, I grab onto them with mine and lightly suck on your bottom lip while running one of my hands down the small of your back, and the other hand placed at the back of your neck. I bring my hands around, up to your supple breast and gently cup them. You let out the softest moan.
Your back straightens up a bit as you take a deep breath from the sensation of your breasts being caressed. Your breast feel so soft and supple in my hands, and I keep massaging them while I kiss you. I squeeze your boobs a bit harder now. Your moans, getting slightly louder, are muffled by our lips being locked together.
You’re wearing a black top and black bra underneath, which is peeking out from above your top. I slowly pull down both your top and your bra to expose your soft nipples. I have an immediate urge to taste your supple nipples, which are slightly hard from the subtle draught in the boat house. But for the most part, they feel soft to the touch. I play a bit with your nipples with my fingers before I lower my head to meet your breasts. I lay small kisses around the areola of your right boob and work my way around it, slowly spiralling towards the darker tone of your nipple.
When I finally kiss the tip of your nipple, it almost immediately gets surrounded by tiny goose bumps. I lick the tip of your nipple gently with my tongue, tickling it slightly and making it a bit wet so that it glistens. I look up at your face while I suck on your nipple to see your reaction – your eyes are closed, mouth slightly ajar, and head cocked slightly backwards.
I soon suckle on your left nipple as well to make sure it gets equal attention.
Soon, there’s no need for you to be wearing a top anymore, so I take off your top and unclasp your bra to fully expose your gorgeous breasts.
I really want to build up some sexual tension between us so I don’t immediately work my way down to your pussy. As I am about to stand up, as if we were on the same wavelength, you say shyly “I want to suck your cock”. The sound of your voice and the manner in which you said that instantly gets me hard. I stand up, while you’re still sitting down and looking up at me.
I place myself between your legs so that your head is right in front of my hips. I then unbutton my jeans and pull down my zipper.
Sooner or later, I’m not doing any of the work, because you immediately grab my cock out of my underwear and momentarily stare at it – still shy, but mostly horny at the thought of having my cock deep inside your mouth, and eventually inside your wet pussy.
You then lick the tip of my cock to taste the little bit of pre cum that had dripped down after being so turned on. You then take in a considerable amount of my cock inside your mouth and begin to suck me off.
You wrap your hand around my balls while you continue to suck my cock. My fingers run smoothly through your hair and I slowly begin to guide your head as it takes my cock in and out. I gently push your head slightly farther to take more of me.
Just as I feel like I’m about to cum…I pull out of your mouth and squeeze the tip of my cock to stop me from coming. I mean we’re just getting started – it would be an utter shame if I came even before I could taste your pussy. So while your legs are still spread, I get down on my knees and move your legs slightly further apart. This fully exposes your white panties and also a juicy wet patch just over where your slit is. I bring my head closer to your pussy and run my nose over your panties from the bottom of your pussy along your slit, towards your clit. The fabric of your panties follow the intricate folds and contours of your pussy lips. In the process, I get a nice long whiff of your rich juices. I gently kiss you down your left thigh and get ever so close to your pussy before I work my way back up your thigh. I continue to tease you this way for a bit until I myself can’t take it any longer. So I slide my index finger under your panties and slowly pull them to the side to expose your wet slit – it glistens because of how juicy it is.
I start by kissing you on the sensitive skin beside your pussy lips and feel you getting warmer and warmer as I approach your wetness. I run my tongue from the bottom of your slit up to the hood of your clit. As I do this, the tip of my tongue enters your tight opening slightly, lapping up your warm pussy juices. You feel a slight jolt through your body as my tongue brushes past your clit.
I tickle the hood of your clit with the tip of my tongue, and eventually pull off your panties to expose your bare fully-shaven pussy. I introduce my index finger into your tight love hole and begin to finger fuck you while I continue to lick your swollen clit. With my left thumb I gently massage the area around your tight butt hole. You immediately feel shy about what I might be suggesting by massaging this area, but a part of you wants to give in to the sensation and make this an exciting experience to remember.
I instantly get the urge to have my cock wrapped by the tight walls of your pussy. My already-exposed cock is dripping with pre-cum. I move my cock closer and closer to your pussy. When my cock first touches your pussy, we’re both so wet that your juices and my pre-cum mix together to produce a string of sticky fluid that connects my cock and your pussy every time I pull my cock away.
With the wet juices, I massage your slit with the tip of my cock moving it up and down – from your clit down to the bottom where it even touches your butt hole a bit. This really gets you excited. When I feel like you’re ready to take me in, I push my cock into your pussy. You’re almost out of breath but you manage to let out the sexiest moan.
I soon realize that you’re more than wet enough to take in my whole cock so I quit being gentle about it and thrust my cock as deep as possible into your warm love hole. You gasp for air when I do so, and I begin to thrust my hips faster and faster, each time going a bit deeper into your slit and spreading it open wider and wider. More juices ooze out from the sides of your pussy lips with every thrust, and I notice that you’re starting to get creamy.
I lean over and kiss you while I fuck you as hard as I can. My hands move to your boobs again and grab them hard while my thick cock enters your pussy the deepest it’s ever taken a cock before. I lean further forward so that the base of my cock rubs your clit with every thrust, and this makes you feel like cumming immediately.
I’m also just about to cum so as soon as you begin to moan that you’re about to cum. I tell you that I’m also about to blow my load.
Almost immediately, your pussy wraps so tightly around my cock that it naturally milks the cum out of it. I spurt out cum inside your tight pussy, all over your tight pussy walls, as you gasp for air; your eyes fully shut.
Cum starts to drip out of your pussy.
I lean over near your face and whisper in your ear….”Do you wanna find out what happens in chapter 4 now?”
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/7que7l/youre_about_to_discreetly_pleasure_yourself_while