The Under: Part 1 [MM] [Fantasy]

(This is my first story, and I would love feedback! It’s the beginning piece to a much larger story, and I will definitely write more.)

The sky was dark and bruised purple; roiling with angry looking black masses of clouds. There was a charge, he could feel it, pulsing all around, and the first crack of thunder didn’t surprise him at all. His gaze lifted to that sky, protruding like a voyeur staring back at him over the broken walls of the castle. They knew each other well, the sky and he. Like old friends, they watched each other intent and curious as to what would happen next. He rolled over then, closing his eyes to the world around him, and draped a long arm across the body lying next to him. Deeply, he inhaled the scent of his lover, smiled, and twisted a strand of ashy curls around his finger.

Thinking back now on how they’d gotten here, Avery smiled and let out a small, bitter scoff. He never wanted any of this; taking his father’s place, becoming king, ruling a world he had only really recently gotten to know. And then again, this place was what haunted his dreams. The bitter, cold, darkness of this place was not unknown to him; it was a welcoming envelope of comfort and peace and he hated it still for all the warmth it gave him now.

The body next to him then came alive, shifting and rolling over onto his back; letting out a small grunt as his weight connected again with the mattress. The soft hazel eyes of his lover gazed up at him, and Avery covered that smiling mouth with just as soft a kiss. He prodded gently and deepened their kiss, bringing tongues together, swirling them and mixing together until one could not tell themselves from the other. They parted, and with a wry half smile, Avery pushed himself up on his long, lean arms to gaze down at his husband.

Jay wrinkled his nose and closed his eyes, trying in vain to roll back over, and let out a melodic laugh as Avery brought his face down to nuzzle that small, wonderful space where neck and shoulder meet. Teeth grazed his skin and he inhaled sharply as he felt those teeth sink in further. His chest lifted to meet the pain, and a gutteral, deep moan escaped. He pushed back and heard a chuckle as Avery lifted his head to look at him. Forehead to forehead, eyes half closed, they paused and breathed each other in.

Avery lifted himself then, and brought one leg over to straddle his lover’s soft stomach. He leaned down and brushed their noses together and they collided again in a kiss. Jay pushed up into him again, and Avery growled in return. Their tongues nestled together, twisting and tasting each other, nipping and sucking until they were both swollen and panting. Avery’s green eyes darkened as he stared down at his husband. One slender hand reached down between them and wrapped around Jay’s engorged member. He smiled as he watched Jay’s eyes slide closed and his mouth hang open just slightly so.

Slowly, he moved himself down to nestle between Jay’s legs, pushing them apart with his shoulders and bringing his hot mouth down to meet the dripping tip of his husband’s cock. He lapped at the precum gently with the tip of his tongue and wrapped his mouth around the head. He hummed and Jay’s back arched off the mattress as he pushed himself further into Avery’s mouth. He smiled around his husband and opened his throat, bringing Jay as far into his mouth as he could fit. He sucked gently, and pulled back, letting Jay’s cock fall back against his stomach

Sitting up fully, he looked down at Jay and smiled slowly. He pushed Jay’s legs back together and straddled him again, holding himself just over Jay’s cock and leaning down to take his mouth in a kiss. Jay reached up, grasped Avery’s hips firmly, and pulled him down, burying himself deep. Their lips parted as Avery threw his head back, pulling himself again into a sitting position, and moaning as he felt Jay’s cock inch further inside.

He pulled himself up and pushed back down, gasping each time Jay’s cock pushed against that one little spot sending jolts up his spine and shivers down his legs. Jay’s hands remained firm on his thighs as he pushed up and into him, burying himself deeper and deeper with each thrust. He watched as his husband’s eyes slid closed and he bit his lip to suppress a moan. Jay smirked and thrust himself up hard, pulling Avery’s hips down roughly and felt himself begin to brim over.

Avery’s hands moved to rest on Jay’s chest, and he pushed down as Jay thrust up and he felt that telltale tingle deep in his belly. His head fell forward and he buried his face into Jay’s neck, opening his mouth and biting down hard on the flesh there as he felt his own seed spill over. Jay tightened his grip on Avery’s hips and pushed himself up and up and up and the clap of thunder overhead drown out both their cries as the clouds opened up and the rain fell. Jay’s seed spilled deep into Avery’s belly and he doubled over, squishing his own seed between them, and nuzzled into the bruise that was starting to bloom on Jay’s neck.

The rain dripped into the room from the open ceiling as the two lay together. Avery lifted himself, separating them with a soft moan, and rolled down onto his side, draping his left arm over Jay’s stomach. He looked down at the mess he had left and smiled, “Babe, I think we might need a shower.”

Jay looked down and smiled broadly, “Well, it is raining.”

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/7qpabn/the_under_part_1_mm_fantasy