As a preface, this is an original story I’m writing. I was writing a story some time ago but for various reasons I stopped writing it. When I got the writing bug again I gave up on it as there were various parts I wasn’t happy with, but didn’t want to completely abandon what I had started, so I made this. It’s sort of a spin-off/reboot sorta thing. I’m curious to see what people think.
This one is just as self-insert-y as the last one was, just as self-indulgent, but that’s all because I wrote them for my own enjoyment, a story that I can control and have fun with.
I’ll post a link to my PBWorks page in comments if you’d like to see the “prequels”, I guess you could call them.
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*“Read outs look normal. Temps look a little high but everything looks good. Start it up.”*
*Multiple scientists are walking around the lab, wearing what look like combination radiation and heat protection suits. The lab they’re in is the size of an airplane hangar, and in the center is something like an opened fusion reactor, a multitude of massive tendril-like cables plugged into various areas of the casing for power. And within the casing is a small, floating liquid mass, shifting slightly as if alive. It’s black, an abyss floating on air, drawing the eye into the emptiness of its surface.*
*A few scientists start to type away, hitting buttons and pulling switches, the machine starting to hum as power starts to flow into it.*
*Various screens have readouts on them, showing that the machine is working fine. The orb in the center starts to shift more, stretching out slowly.*
*That is until one scientist, a new hire, looks on in awe, backing up to watch the machine go to work. He bumps into another scientist, causing a lever to slam open, pushing too much power on at one time. The orb suddenly shudders and starts spreading out faster, violently. The lead scientist starts to get panicked as the readouts start to go into the red.*
*“Shut it down! Shut it all down! Emergency shutdown! Now! The Dimensional Rift’s Event Horizon is going into overload!” He starts shouting to everyone who quickly start to try and shut the machines down.*
*But the damage is done. The orb continues to grow until it reaches the size of a small car, an ear piercing screech suddenly ripping through the air, causing every scientist to try and cover their ears which start to bleed profusely. They then all drop to the ground as the gravity around the area suddenly shifts, increasing to about 3 times Earth’s gravity.*
*“Get out! Get out now!” The lead scientist shouts, trying to evacuate his workers, but noone can hear him. He can barely hear himself in fact. Suddenly the pure black surface of the orb starts to white and he quickly runs from the lab, only a few other scientists noticing and following behind. Guards dressed in military fatigues look on as the scientists start running out, looking on with raised eyebrows, raising their rifles. “RUN! IT’S GONNA BL-”*
*The surrounding area suddenly goes white as a massive explosion rips through the surrounding area. Wiping the military research base off the map.*
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I push away from my computer and sigh heavily. It’s been 2 years since I last posted a chapter of my story, “Cold and Weary Traveller”. It was basically a self-insert story I started writing because I liked the idea. My main character’s name was Marcus, my name is Marcus, he’s built like me, looked like me aside from a few minor details. It was just something I wanted to write because it seemed fun and it was until some bad times made it difficult to write. So I got stuck and can’t come up with anything else. I’ve got half a chapter written but can’t bring myself to continue.
*I guess I’ll just go sit down and watch some videos, maybe some news.* I think as I walk towards the living room of my small apartment. I live in a small, decent apartment with one bedroom, one bathroom, a small living room and a kitchen connected to it. Not nearly as fancy as Marcus from the story. Neither is my job, I work at a game store full time. Though we do look similar: my hair is black and kind of short, but I’ve got a full, trimmed beard. I’m kind of fit, but not nearly as in shape as I made story-me out to be. I go to a local MMA gym to work out since I’ve always enjoyed that, so I am getting fit. I’m also a bit pale because I don’t go out too much. But I don’t have a scar from a “crazy ex-girlfriend.” I’ve never had one. I also don’t have a short, shy, cute neighbor. I definitely have a hot neighbor, but she’s super uptight and I think she hates me, which sucks.
Anyway, enough about me. If I do continue, I want to edit out all the product placement. Makes me uncomfortable now that I think back on it. I turn the TV on and switch it over to the nightly news.
“*Breaking news: A large explosion in the Nevada desert destroys a hidden military research base. Reports show tha-*” Suddenly the screen goes static and all the lights blink off, a short power surge and I look around nervously.
“Holy shit… I’m nowhere near Nevada, I hope that isn’t affecting us here.” I wait a few minutes until the lights turn back on then flick the TV back on. The station is offline for now and sigh, switching over to my game console to watch some videos. “Oh well, I’ll look it up later.” Once my console starts, it shows the Wi-Fi is still offline. I decide to wait, looking over my phone. I have data on my phone at least so I don’t need it.
So I wait for 10 minutes. Still down.
20 minutes. Still down.
30 minutes. Still down.
I give up and turn off the console, scrolling my phone for a while to look for funny stuff, then grab my tablet to start reading a few books. After a while I lay back on my couch, starting to get tired. I set my tablet down and look up at the ceiling.
“I don’t want to let Lilith just… Fade away…” I yawn heavily, settling into the pillows, deciding to sleep on the couch tonight. “I want to write more of her. Explore her more…” I chuckle softly and shake my head. *Don’t lie to yourself. You just want Lilith. She’s hot and likes you. And she’s a succubus. It’d be fun. That’s all I really want…* “I want Lilith…” I whisper before drifting off to sleep.
The TV comes back on around midnight, news still going on. “*We’re back? Ok. Welcome back folks, we have reports from multiple scientists of ‘Dimensional Fissure Events”, DFEs for short. The experiments at the military base that exploded earlier today caused what is being called a ‘Dimensional Phase Shift’, which caused our dimension to interact with a similar dimension. This means that across the world, portals known as DFEs are opening up and our world is fusing with the world from the other dimension, and vise versa. If people or creatures are thrown into your near vicinity, or buildings or locations are shifted, please contact emergency services.*”
My head throbs as I wake up slowly, grumbling. I look around, seeing the TV is on again, showing a news story. “Wh-Wha…? Di… D-Dimensional Fissure Events? Dimensional Phase Shift? The fuck?” I rub my eyes and shake my head. “What time is it? Why’s it so bright?” I grab my phone, looking at the time. It says 12:13 a.m.
I raise an eyebrow at that and look up. “Forgot to turn out the li-WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT!?” I jump from the couch, looking up to my ceiling where I would usually see the light above the living room. There’s now a bright disk of swirling lights, and I cover my eyes as it gets brighter and brighter. “What’s that noise!?” I say out to no one in particular. It’s one of those times when you just need to shout because you’re confused to shit.
The noise I’m hearing sounds like screaming, but… It’s not coming from the walls, like a neighbor screaming. It’s coming from the portal! I lift my hand some to look again when.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH-OOF!”
With a loud crash, a *person* comes out of the portal, which promptly closes, and lands on the floor. The force they had on impact I’m surprised they didn’t crash through to the floor below, but I’m even more surprised that they’re actually sitting up!
The person is actually a woman. I blush as I look her over. She’s got a very slight tan, hefty F cup breasts, a slender waist, and wide hips to match her breasts. She rolls to her side, dizzy, and I get a look at her plump bubble butt, also matching her breasts, and thick thighs on lovely legs.
But her body isn’t the most striking of her features. What’s amazing to me, is that she has pure white hair, like fresh snow. Scale-like horns curling from the back of her head to the front. Two large bat-like wings sprouting from her shoulder blades, white with purple membranes and black bone-y bits. Then, she has a white tail with a spaded tip. I gulp hard as she finally rights herself, looking up at me. Her eyes have black sclera, with red irises and black pupils. Her lips curl up into a happy smile that melts my heart. She’s wearing what looks like some kind of armored dress, with gauntlets up to her shoulders and leg plates and such, showing off more than enough skin to allure a person, but protect her with magic properties.
Now, I know it sounds like I just described Lilith from my story, maybe a bit curvier than before, but that’s because this girl looks almost exactly like her. *Is… Is it…?* “Lilith?”
She jumps slightly and raises an eyebrow. “How… Did you know my name?”
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“So… You wrote a story… About us… And described me almost exactly?” Lilith says, sitting in my desk chair, having made her wings disappear so she would stop knocking things over. But she still has her tail and horns out, so she still looks like a demon.
I nod a little. “Y-Yea. I-Is th-that weird?” I ask, nervously.
She shrugs. “I guess not. Besides, the backstory isn’t right so it’s not me. I don’t come from a ‘demon realm’, my mom isn’t the ‘demon lord’, and I never had a hellhound puppy girl.” She looks back to the image on the screen. “*But that dog girl is certainly cute…*” She says under her breath, then turns back to me, legs crossed in the chair and I have to force myself to look back up into her face. The plunging neckline of her dress has me dragging my eyes from her breasts constantly. “But no, that’s not me exactly. I’m a succubus, yea, and I was fighting a hero girl from my world. She was kinda mad because I turned her friend into a succubus too.”
Then she gets a pouty look on her face and starts flailing her arms. “But it’s not my fault! Her friend asked me to do it! She wanted to seduce the hero girl! And what am I supposed to do, turn down a free lay? Hell no!” I chuckle softly as I watch this display and she looks at me hard, still pouting. “What, you think it’s funny?”
I shake my head, smiling. “N-No no, not at all. I just find you really cute. You’re still a lot like Lilith from my story.”
She blushes some, bringing a hand to her cheek at my compliment. “O-Oh. Well, thank you.” She smiles. “You’re pretty cute too. Honestly, I’d totally fuck you.” My face goes red at that and then hers does when she sees mine. “I-I-I didn’t m-mean it like that! S-Seriously! O-Or I did, rather, I-I do think you’re cute! I-I mean I haven’t been thinking about sucking your cock for the past half hour, o-or you pinning me down and pounding me like a 2 coin brothel whore or or or…” Her eyes kinda glaze over as they dart around, her mind running wild with various sexual situations she would enjoy herself in.
Before she pops her top and smoke blows out her ears I step over and grab her shoulders. “L-Lilith!” She jolts back to reality and looks up to me, a red tint still present on her cheeks. I smile and the red becomes more apparent. “It’s ok. Relax…” She nods a little and I feel the tension leave her as I step back.
She takes a deep breath, closes her eyes, and stands up, letting the armored pieces of her dress fade away, leaving only the black, skin-tight piece. She opens them and looks into mine, her eyes about level with mine. I’m 5’10”, she’s 5’9” or so. “Thank you.” She says softly, eyes mesmerized by her lips long enough for her to lean in and give me a kiss on the cheek. I jump slightly, but let it happen. I smile when she steps back, her signature smile on her lips as she lets out a soft giggle.
Then, she takes my hand and pulls me back towards the living room. “So, help me understand your world some more. See if we can’t decipher what happened in our worlds to figure out why I’m here and not still back home.” I nod a little, letting her drag me to the couch. Once there, she pushes me down onto it with a big smile and sits beside me, close enough for our legs to touch, making me blush some more. “So, what do you know about what happened?”
I point to the TV, the news still going on about the DFEs and whatever. “Some scientists were doing… *Something*, I don’t know, and something made our dimensions interact in a weird way, which opened up a bunch of portals and stuff was coming out.” I’m a little nervous, but gently I poke her in the thigh. “One of em was you.” She smiles some at that, a little rouge to her cheeks.
“Ok then. Well back home when I was fighting the hero girl, she was definitely made for me turning her friend into a succubus, but she was also defending these mages that were doing something. I had a peek and saw that they were opening a portal for something, I’m not sure what, then suddenly there was a massive explosion. It leveled the castle where they were doing the ritual, then there was a bright light, then I landed in your living room!” She says, smiling happily as she leans into me playfully.
Then she gets a sort of serious look on her face. “So in our world, we have magic. We also knew about your world, there are a lot of mages that had peeked into your world just to look at everything. They tried to recreate some of your science stuff, but it always failed. So I’m thinking that your world got all the science while mine got all the magic. If the laws of the universe don’t prevent it, then your world might get magic too and my world might get science. We’ll have to test some stuff out for sure.”
“Th-That makes sense.” I say, nodding a little. “I mean, your wings worked so I guess the magic still works, for now at least. I’m just a little nervous, what if it does do some serious damage to us, or the universe?”
Lilith half frowns and nods. “Yea, that would be a problem. Need to think of a way that could cause minimal damage to anything.” She says, looking to me a little. “Well… I’ve got a few spells that we could test…” She whispers, turning in a little more, looking up at me, her hand drifting down to my thigh.
I blush heavily as I turn towards her. Her hand darts to my cheek, keeping me turned in her direction, when she pushes her lips to mine. She pushes mine open with her tongue and lets it press against my own oral muscle. I grunt, starting to pull away but she pushes herself onto me as I fall back to the couch.
She holds me with a smile and rubs my cheek with her hand. Her lips are slightly parted, cheeks flushed. She just looks… Horny. “Marcus, you’re a very sweet guy. It’s been a long time since I found a man I liked, and you definitely fit the bill. But I don’t want to do anything that you wouldn’t want to do… So, will you help me test my magic?” She smiles slightly, making my heart flutter much like the first time, and she nuzzles up against me. “I promise, it’ll be worth your while.”
This is happening really fast. A beautiful succubus woman just landed in my living room and now she’s taken my first kiss, looking very eager to fuck, and asking me to test magic. “S-So long as you don’t turn me into a mindless slave and kick me out of my house naked, l-let’s do it.”
The grin that pops up on this girl’s face is enormous and adorable as she squeezes me with all her might. Which turns out to be a lot and nearly crushes my lungs. “Thank you!” She kisses me again, hard. I blush more but her lips are incredibly soft now that I’m focusing on it, and I can’t help but kiss back. After a few moments of kissing, she pulls away and sits back on her heels, letting her hands run over my legs gently, smiling. “Ok, let’s get started… I’m going to need you to strip.” She says with a quick giggle before snapping her fingers.
Next thing I know, my clothes are starting to burn away and I jump, panicking a *little* as I try to put them out. Lilith just giggles again as I quickly find myself to be naked in front of her. Then she points to the coffee table and I relax, a little, seeing my clothes neatly folded there. “It’s ok, just needed to get you prepared.” She says, though I keep my junk covered by my hands.
She brings her hands up and starts to make slow gestures with them, whispering softly before closing her eyes. After just a few minutes of this she opens her eyes and I can see them glowing. She smiles warmly before placing her hand on my thigh. A soft blue flame arises for just a moment before before it wicks into my skin. “Now we wait!”
I sit, blushing as I look up at her face. She giggles some before snapping her fingers, her dress burning away as well. I blush even more now, seeing her completely nude in front of me. She brings a hand up and gently cups one breast with a wink, before letting it drop. Her breasts are extremely perky. They don’t look fake, but there is no hint of sag to them even though they’re fairly huge. She cups both of them now and starts to squeeze and spread them in a circle, watching my reaction to the teasing.
I’m panting softly at this point, my cock starting to get hard. I feel really warm, really warm, like I’ve got a fever. Lilith lets go of her breasts again and they bounce as they do. She smiles and brings her hand down to very slowly rub down my thigh.
I shiver when she does, letting out a shuddering moan. “Wh-Wha?” I say, confused.
Lilith just giggles again. “It’s an arousal spell.” She says, moving my hands out of the way to examine my engorged member, soon reaching full mast. She bites her lip softly as she looks it over. It’s about 8 inches long and an inch thick. It interests her for sure, but it’s likely not the biggest she’s had.
She drags her nail down the urethral bulge and I grunt, panting a bit harder when she pulls it away. “It makes you extremely horny. Very good for getting people to settle down and do as you ask.” She wraps her hand around my prick and starts stroking it slowly. My hips buck each time a finger passes my glans, my face completely red at this point, balls tensing, ready to burst.
As if reading my mind, Lilith brings a finger down from her other hand and slowly draws a circle around my testicles. “No you don’t!” A sigil forms around them before cinching up. I feel it do so, and the orgasm that was rising suddenly stops, trapped at the very edge which Lilith seems to be in control of now.
“O-Oh fuck… L-Lilith, o-oh fuck…”
She’s loving it, the teasing, the arousal, the faces, the noises, all of it. And I can see it on her face. “Don’t worry Marcus, I’ll make it all better soon. You’ll love it, promise…” She continues stroking my shaft as she drops her other hand down to cup my balls. Leaning in, she licks her lips, letting the blue flame form over her lips before she kisses my shaft, then leans back and continues stroking and kneading.
I grunt hard, moaning loudly as I feel the fire hit my junk. My cock felt hard before, but now it feels like it’s getting harder. I grunt again, then pant, looking down in a slight panic as I watch Lilith working. “L-… L-Lilith, wh-what’s happening?”
“Shhhh. Just watch.” She says, still stroking my dick and fondling my balls. For a moment she squeezes the base of it, then very slowly strokes it up. I grunt again, but it feels like she’s stretching it longer. She continues doing that, taking slow strokes and making my cock longer with each one. 8 inches soon turns to 9, then 10. But she doesn’t stop there. I start to press deeper into the couch, moaning loudly as she *finally* stops at an enormous 14 inches long.
Then she grips it with both hands and slowly pulses her squeezes with them.I buck my hips more and feel my cock starting to expand very slowly. The 1 inch soon becomes 2.5 as Lilith moans, drooling slightly over the large, red tipped head of my new giant cock.
She drops her hands back down now and cups my balls, kneading them once more. They tighten up hard and I grit my teeth before I feel a looseness. They expand until they both fill her hands. They were about 2 inches across before, fairly hefty, but now each testicle is the size of a baseball.
She pulls her hands away finally and shivers hard, looking over my giant cock. I pant hard as I look down and nod. “Y-Yea. I-I think. Y-Your.. Your magic s-still. Works…” I say, my cock throbbing angrily before her. She very slowly crawls forward and presses down on my cock with her exposed slit, drenching my crotch in an instant.
“Is there anything you’d like me to change…?” She says, gently taking my hands to place on her hips. I slide my hands up slowly, to cup her breasts as she lets her hands follow. She giggles softly before leaning in to give me a soft kiss. “How big?”
My lips press to hers again as I squeeze her hefty orbs, then pinch her nipples. “HH cups…” I say softly. She nods and leans in to kiss my neck, letting me knead her breasts more. Soon, I feel more flesh poor out into my hands very slowly, making it hard to hold them as time goes on. She then leans back, shaking side to side to let her huge breasts sway back and forth, biting her lip as she does.
“A-And m-match your hips and ass. Y-Your whole body, make it fit your breasts.” She nods, turning around so her ass is facing me. Then she starts to wiggle her ass and hips and I watch as her ass expands, getting more and more jiggle to it while her hips grow wider and wider. Her thighs thicken up to follow, and while her waist keeps fairly slim, it thickens up just a little so she doesn’t look so pinched in.
Slowly, Lilith climbs back up to me and lays down in the groove between me and the back of the couch, her hefty breasts resting on my chest while she brings her leg up further, her thick thigh rubbing against my huge dick. “Do you like me like this…?” She asks quietly, staring up at me, desire filling her eyes.
I nod a little as I give her a soft kiss, the soft smack of our lips sounding better every time I hear it. “Yea. B-But I’d like you no matter what, you’re so beautiful.” She blinks rapidly, smiling as she looks down, nuzzling against my chest some more, her horns rubbing against my collar bone. Then I feel her leathery tail wrap around my leg, threading through a few of my toes, then rubs her dainty feet against my own.
“Should we… Should we go to your bed?” She asks, and then I nod a little. She stands up slowly and helps me up before walking away. She lets her tail snake around my cock, pulling me along like that. I get mesmerized by her huge ass as she sways her hips with each step. I let her pull me along, mind swimming a fair bit from this unnatural arousal.
But as soon as we get close to the bed I practically tackle her to the bed. She yelps then laughs happily until I kiss her hard. She then moans, pushing her tongue against mine. “Mm… Mm mmm…” I hold her close as we kiss more until she slowly rolls me onto my back and climbs into my lap. She hugs me close, her massive breasts rubbing against my chest. “Oh Marcus…” She presses down on my cock and slowly rubs it with her lower lips, just like before. “I want you so bad…”
I kiss her deeply, holding her tight to me. I thrust gently, rubbing my dick against her more, eliciting more moans from us both. “I want you too. But uh…” I blush deeply. “This is my first time.”
Lilith giggles and brushes my hair back gently. “Don’t worry dear, it’ll be wonderful…” She reaches down and takes hold of my cock, lifting it up to line up with her quivering hole. She takes a few quick breaths before *quickly* dropping down on my cock, my cock plowing through her vagina, then it punches through her cervix the last bit settling into her womb. Her back goes rigid and she screams in delight, her hands going up to run through her hair. Her stomach bulges with the sheer size of my cock.
I moan loud and gently pull her down into a deep kiss. Her eyes are rolling back into her head as the pleasure really starts to hit her. After a few moments, she settles down and kisses me back with a nuzzle, smiling warmly. “Oh god it’s perfect…” She says, bites her lip and kisses me again. “Thank you for letting me make it like this, it’s so good…”
“N-No problem, i-it feels amazing, thank you…” I say with shivers and moans. Then I chuckle. “But I think I’ll probably have some trouble masturbating.
Lilith giggles, biting my lip gently, nuzzling into my cheek. “Oh, you’ll never have to worry about that again… I’ll service this slab of meat every time you need it…” I smile some and place my hands on her hips before starting to lift and drop her onto my dick. She moans loud and kisses me again before planting her feet on the bed. She starts to really rock her hips, bouncing up and down on my cock nice and hard. The bed starts to creak quickly, thumping against the wall. I can’t notice it at the moment, but it’s hitting against my hot neighbor’s wall.
My balls tense up and I groan deeply, cock throbbing hard as Lilith keeps up the ride. “L-Lilith! I-I need to cum so bad!”
She moans happily and nods, kissing me. “Th-Then cum! Cum whenever you want! You’ll recover in an instant! So we can keep going all night!”
I bite my lip hard, moaning deeply. I’m about to speak up but then Lilith squeezes with her pussy, sending pleasure wreaking havoc across my body, interrupting my thoughts. *N-No! I-I mean I can’t cum! Y-You still have the spell on me!* She bounces faster and faster, hips rocking against me as she moans more and more, soon a splash of juices flowing from her lower lips. She screams in pleasure from her orgasm but keeps up the ride. I grunt hard, bucking my hips as she holds me close, pressing me between her breasts. My eyes start to cross as the pleasure just grows and grows but never crests the peak. Lilith just keeps riding while my cock throbs as fast as my heart does. My thrusts up have devolved into just shivers of pleasure.
But as Lilith cums again, the sigil around my cock starts to break apart finally. After a few more slams on my cock from her powerful hips, the sigil finally breaks and I buck up hard into her hips. I yell loud, holding her tight to me as my cock swells in response to the release seal and my cum rockets through from my testes, up my cock, and pumps her womb full and then some.
My breath becomes ragged and I drop back to the bed, shivering as my vision starts to go dark. “Oh that was so good, Marcus…” She says softly, rubbing her full belly. She rubs her hand down to my stomach and smiles, slowly laying down onto me, nuzzling against my chest. “Wasn’t it…?” She asks.
But I can’t respond, I can’t keep awake. My heart thumps in my chest hard, but it’s slowing down…
“Marcus?” She asks, looking up at me. “Marcus?” She puts her ear to my chest, then her face goes white. “I forgot to remove the seal! F-Fuck!” She sits back up and looks at me, fading away. “H-Hold on Marcus, I’ll fix it…” I watch as she slowly places her hands on my chest, but then I pass out…
“Hold on… Master…”
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/6e8q6n/dimensional_shift_chapter_1_writers_block_str8_mf
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really nice story, keep it up