(This is a short story from a friend. Just looking for internet criticism! Forgive the spelling and grammar!)
I always look forward to this day…..the day we rondevu and get away from our hectic and complicated lives. But today was different….the look in ur eyes was not the same…knowing you had a rough week I walk over to the mini bar and pour us some drinks. Gin and tonic I think. I place a simple kiss on ur cheek and say I will be right back. I requested this room because it had a jacuzzi tub ….I walk into the bathroom, turn the water on, as it heats up I add in a little bubble. Then light a couple candles. The flames flickering and the reflection from the mirror seemed mesmerizing. As soon as the tub was full for two I turned on the jets. I stepped out and walked over to you….I could see a smile on ur face. As I got closer…..u put ur drink down and reached for my hand pulling me closer. Ur hands on my hips….slipped under my shirt…and I could feel u loosen my pants and then sliding them down my long tan legs. Standing in front of u wearing only a sheer white button down I smile at u and taking ur hand lead u to the bath. By the time we reached the bathroom ur shirt was off and ur shoes. Let me help u with those jeans…..undoing the button and slowly unzipping them….my hands casually grazing ur already hard thick cock…..mmmm.. thinking that I can excite u is such a turn on….sliding ur pants and boxers down so I can appreciate every inch of ur incredible body….
I watch u step into the tub. …and realize we will need our drinks…..when I return with them u look at me and tell me to get my little ass in there with u. So I unbutton my shirt….my eyes never leave ur gaze….as each button was released I could see the look of desire come back….I step in the tub behind u….my legs on each side of u. Grabbing the soapy washcloth I gently start washing ur back as I place gentle kisses at the curve of ur neck and shoulders.
As I inch closer to you….my breasts are pressed against ur back as I wrap my arms around u and wash ur chest….slowly as to feel every muscle and touch every inch of u. I can feel ur hands on my thighs sliding up and down….we lean back together and as u rest ur head against my shoulder I run my fingers thru ur hair….after enjoying the relaxing effects of the jets, hot water and soothing touch, u ask me to stand up for a moment….always wanting to please u…I do…u motion for me to step around in front of u. Water splashing everywhere….ur hands grab my butt and u pull me in….ur lips exploring my thighs and slowly working ur way up to my sweet spot. Mmmm. Bracing myself against the wall…..ur tongue teasing me as I feel u slip two fingers inside me….u hear a moan of pure pleasure…..not wanting to have this end so quickly….u lower me down to where I am sitting in top of u….sliding down ur massive shaft….knowing I enjoy feeling u inside me. Moving my hips against yours…ur hands on my breasts….a flick and pinch of my nipples….u feel my hips moving faster….taking u in deeper…
I can feel ur eyes on me….watching me….I smile at u and slip off u….I turn to kneel and lean over the edge of the tub….and I can feel u slide behind me….one hard thrust into….mmmm…. .taking one hand u push my shoulders down and the other grabbing my hip and moving us together….my head tilts back and I can see us in the mirrors…..thank goodness for candle light. …a hear a throaty moan from me as I bite my lower lip….
U start thrusting harder and faster…..u feel so good….u feel my muscles tighten around u my legs quiver and a oh god yes from my lips…..u pull out and press against my butt and cum all over me….
Leaning back into the water melting into each….we enjoy our drinks and the sound of the bubbles
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Source: reddit.com/r/eroticstories/comments/62lfjb/a_night_away