Is this my thing?

So I was told that what I wrote was really good. Not sure if it is. Other then my writing this in like an hour and a half and on my phone this was easy to do. I haven’t proof read it. Please just let me know the truth.

you hear a knock on the door so you open the door.. but as soon as you do I walk in, grab you by your hips and push you against the wall. you know its me so you don’t panic. I close the door and turn off the lights. The moonlight coming through your window is enough for both of us to see. I come back to you and i press myself against you… my hips pushing in against yours. you start to breathe harder and harder. you want this, you want me. I spread your legs with mine and push my knee in between yours and push up against your pussy. You r breath is getting heavier again so i grab your hands and i pin them over your head. holding them in place with one hand while i grab your neck with the other. i pull your face in closer to mine… your can feel my breath… and that makes you hornier… i feel you moving your hips a bit so i press in with my knee a lil more. I lean in and i start yo kiss you… first i start to kiss your upper lip. lightly nibbling on it. feeling how soft and heavenly your lips feel, i move on to your bottom lip as my hands move on to your tits.

you move your hands and i tell you to keep them up there…as i pull your hair back exposing your neck… your soft skin… it’s amazing just thinking about you… but now i have you… i start to kiss your neck, sucking on it, nibbling on it… lightly.i then move down. kissing your collar bone, your chest. I move away… and you… being a good girl and listening to me, you keep your hands up and stay up against the wall… i grab your hips lift you up and carry you to the bed. I lay you down and i keep kissing you chest. teasing you by lightly brushing my lips over your nipples.

you ask me if you can put your hands on my head.but before finish i start to nibble on your nipple with my lips covering my teeth so they don’t hurt too bad. You grab my hair and start to tug on in a bit. It gets me even more excited. i step back and i take of my clothes. you can’t see too much but you can definitely see that i am rock hard and ready… i get to you. and i stop to admire your body with my hands… i run my hands everywhere on you. from your neck to your shoulders. to you back. from your hips to your legs and feet. I grab your feet and lift them up so i can lay and eat you out. to make it easier for me i tell you to use your hands to hold your legs up and separated. so you wrap you arms your knees. “Like this Daddy?” that drive me crazy so I slap your ass. you moan and yell out “I want more DADDY!” I slap your ass again. leaving a mark and i stick my tongue in you. you arch your back and let out a moan. I taste you and you taste delicious. I start to stroke my cock with one hand and use my other to play with you clit. slowly pinching it while i lick you everywhere. your moaning louder and louder so i know you gonna cum. so i tell you to cum in my mouth. You let out a scream and start shaking. i lick it all up.
“I want you in me daddy. please put it in?”
I bring my hips to your ass and start to slide my cock up and down you pussy while you move you hips, eager for me. I grab my cock and I slide it in.Your so warm and slippery inside, it feels so good and as i look… you are rolling your eyes back and shaking while squeezing my dick with you pussy. I move my hips back and forth slowly speeding up. you start to touch my chest and my arms and i lean over to grab your hips. I use them to keep you in in place as I thrust my hips into you. I want you see you go crazy in ecstasy so I lean in to suck in your nipples… I play with one… sucking on them and while in my mouth… I move my tongue around and I gently bite down. You moan and that makes me moan. I’m about to cum… so I slow down and then pull out… I stand up and tell you to get on all fours on the edge of the bed… you do.

I come in from behind you I slap your ass and you moan in pleasure. You kinky lil thing… you gave me an idea. I reach down and use my belt to tie your hands behind your back. I want to use it so when I’m trusting my hips into you… I can bring you right back. I grab your hips and I start to tease you rubbing my dick up and down your slit. You anticipate it and push back, making my dick slip in. That’s not what I wanted. So í reach over and I grab a hand full of hair and pull it back. “bad girl, now your gonna have to do the work. So í stay still and I have you rock back and forth on me. I tell you to go faster. So your do… your moaning so your loving it. I slap your ass and say “I tell you when it goes in”, “ok daddy” you reply.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/5ufi06/is_this_my_thing