I’m not much of a writer, please be kind.
The clock ticks closer and closer to six. I have about fifteen minutes left, and everything is almost ready. Music plays softly in the background, dinner is warm in the oven, and I just finished the last touches on my makeup. Ten more minutes. My heart starts to race faster. I nervously smooth the soft fabric of my white lace dress and absentmindedly fool with the charm on my collar. Five more minutes.
In a last minute fit of paranoia I go to put one more fresh coat of lipstick on. His GPS still puts him a few minutes out, but I can’t help but to run to my place by the bedroom door. My eyes are glued to the GPS as I start to practice my pose. Arms behind my arched back, on my knees, looking upwards. I shut the phone off and hear Andrew walk up the stairs slowly.
The door shuts loudly and I can’t help the huge smile encompassing my face. He peeks around the corner, wearing sly grin, and I can tell that he finds my expression endearing. “Daddy!” I say excitedly. “Hello, sweetheart” he says, before bending to his knees and taking my face in his hands and kissing me sweetly. He stands quickly and unzips his pants. I open my mouth and stick my tongue out slightly like he wants. I can tell by his face that he likes it. When I look up, his bulging cock confirms it.
We do this ritual every week day when he comes home from work. I get in my position, he comes in and greets me, and then he shoves his cock in mouth to use. We do this partly because I am very greedy with my daddy’s cock, and he knows that I need it every day. Also, it serves as an excellent release for all of the stressors Andrew faces at his job. I am always on time. Half because I love doing it, and half because I’m afraid of my punishment.
Andrew grabs my hair on the top of my head and forces his pulsing cock deeper and deeper down my throat. He takes his cock out of my mouth every so often to smack me across the face with it or rub it all over my lips. I can hardly breath, and it seems that the more I gasp and struggle, the more excited he gets. “How was your day, honey?” He laughs as I gag, sputter, and try to make a sound with his cock shoved in my mouth. He continues to ask me questions and laugh as he starts to fuck my face harder, plunging his cock deeper as I moan and choke. He takes his cock out of my mouth and shoves my face against his balls. Usually Andrew will just use this time to give me his cum, but I could tell by his eyes that it was going much farther than that.
“Aw, honey, your makeup is all messy” he says as he smears my eye with his thumb, showing me all the black smudges from my mascara. “You look like such a pretty fucking slut” he growls. “Thank you, daddy”. He points sternly at the bedroom door, and I obediently enter the room and sit on the bed. He points to a mirror on a wall and mentions I should take a look. My red lipstick covers my lips and chin. I can see big blotchy marks from my eyeliner and mascara. I’m slightly embarrassed, but simultaneously turned on by seeing the evidence of being his fuck toy.
As he climbs into the bed he orders me to stand in front of him, and I obey. He asks me to do a variety of different things as he slowly strokes his cock underneath the covers. He tells me to turn around, slowly, touch your toes, put your hands behind your head, turn around again. I feel vulnerable at times due to my pussy being so soaked from being his doll. He tells me to change my clothes. He wants me to wear pigtails, my collar, a short skirt, and knee socks. Nothing else. I quickly change in front of him, catching glimpses of his movement, driving me insane to know that I make him so pleased.
After I change, he lays me down on the bed and organizes a line of toys beside me. My face is flushed as I wonder what he will do next. Andrew begins to examine me. Crouching down in front of my pussy, lifting up my skirt, exploring me with his hands. Every so often he gives my swollen clit a short rub, which sends shivers down my spin. As I can feel him spreading my lips open, he whispers how pretty he thinks my pussy is, and how he can’t wait to use me to cum inside.
Andrew motions at the toys and asks me which one he should use first, and I sheepishly motion at the small egg vibrator on the left. He smirks and grabs the Hitachi with a menacing look on his face as he flips it on full power. “Daddy, no!” I exclaim, unsure if my pussy could withstand such a force while being so wet and sensitive. “What did you just say to me”? He responds angrily. “Nothing, daddy. I’m sorry.” I reply, realizing my error. “That’s right nothing. I don’t need your instructions to take care of you slutty pussy, baby” he says, following with forcefully rubbing the vibrator against my clit. A half moan/shriek exits my body as I squirm wildly. “Stay still!” he demands.
He takes pity on me and turns down the power to low. He gives me the hitachi and demands that I hold it onto my clit, no exceptions, no breaks. He picks the skinny pink toy from the line and slowly begins to push it inside me. A deep moan escapes me and I start to feel my legs shake. He turns up the power. The room starts to spin as I feel the tingling of my orgasm start. My daddy can always tell when I’m close, so he starts fucking my pussy hard with my toy. “I fucking own you, whore” he growls as the orgasm takes hold of my body, every inch involuntarily shaking as I scream in pleasure.
Andrew turns off the hitachi and comes to lie beside me. “Thank you, daddy” I say, exhausted. “Do you know what time it is now?” He asks. “It’s time for me to earn your cum, daddy.” He nods. I assume my position, on my knees, arms behind my arched back. “How will you use me first, daddy?” I ask him. He pauses, “Hmm, that’s a good question, sweetheart. It’s hard to pick which hole I want first” he says. Andrew opens my legs and looks at my pussy, spreading my lips apart. He quickly slips two fingers inside me and I squirm with surprise. He takes his fingers out and sticks them in mouth. “Good girl” he responds, rubbing his cock with his other hand.
He commands me to get on my hands and knees and stands behind me menacingly. Suddenly he slaps his hand across my ass, hard. I can’t help but to yell out a little, being caught so off guard. “What do you say!” he screams. “Thank you, Daddy!” I respond as I brace for another. He slaps my ass from the opposite side. “Thank you, daddy!” I moan again. He does this three more times and I can feel the warmth radiating off his handprints. Then, his hands rubbing the marks, his mouth kissing them gently.
He stands behind me and tells me to spread my cheeks for him, with my face laying on the bed. I comply and feel his thick cock slowly sliding inside my slippery pussy. When he’s about halfway in he grabs my hips and thrusts himself all the way inside me. I can’t stop moaning. The ecstasy of his cock drives me over the edge. He grabs my hips tighter and starts to pound my hungry pussy. “Who owns your pussy, whore?” He asks as he fucks me hard and deep. “You do, daddy” I respond. He grabs a bunch of my hair and pulls me up as he pounds me hard. A load moan escapes me as I cum with him inside of me.
After I finish he pushes me off of him and to the side. He lies down on his back and commands me to ride his cock. I climb on top of him and slowly lower myself on top of his throbbing cock. I try to go slowly and ease myself, but he pushes his cock into me greedily. I grab the bed frame with my hands and start to bounce of top of him. My breasts are shaking and he cups them in his hands while I bounce eagerly on his cock. His hands travel from my breasts to my neck and he squeezes my throat tightly. He takes turns choking me and slapping me with his open palm. After every strike I thank him, sincerely. His grasp around my neck suddenly becomes much tighter as I’m bent above him, taking his big cock and gasping for air. “Tell me you love me, toy” he commands me, “I love you, daddy.” As I start to cum the room gets blurry and I feel my muscles relax as I explode all over him.
I collapse on his chest, shaking and breathing heavily. He rolls me off of him, lays me down beside him. “Baby,” he says to me, “you made a mess on me”. “I’m sorry, daddy” I respond sweetly. “You know what you have to do,” he says, stretching his arms behind his head. I take his cock in my hand and start to massage him slowly. “Your mouth, whore,” he urges, “now.” I put him in my mouth and taste my sweet cum off his cock. I feel mixed emotions of discomfort and pride in making my daddy happy. Andrew moans as I swallow him and push him down my throat.
I can feel his cock getting stiffer and I start to work him hard, insanely hungry for his cum. He suddenly pushes me off and commands me to lie on my back. He climbs over my face and straddles me with his legs. He pushes his cock into my mouth and fucks my face, leaving me immobile. Andrew is fully using my mouth and my only focus is catching small breaths in between his thrusts. “That’s a good fuck toy, good girl” he groans to me. I can tell that he’s close.
He pulls his cock out of my mouth and starts to stroke it in between my eyes. I rub my fingers around my clit in circles in excitement for my reward. He groans loudly and I can hear catches in his breath, which drives me crazy. His groans stop for a moment, and I feel the thick, hot ropes of his cum start to coat my forehead, nose, and lips. My tongue waves around wildly, trying to catch as much of my reward as possible. He shakes the remaining drips of cum from the head of his cock on my face as I remain smiling, glowing with happiness. “Good girl, fuck. Good girl,” he says to me, slowly lying down on his back. Andrew pulls up the blanket and covers us, grabbing my hand and holding it in his. “How do you feel?” he asks me. “I feel incredible, how do you feel?” I ask. “Perfect. Pleased with you,” he says with a satisfied look on his face.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/5hokau/i_took_the_time_to_write_one_of_my_fantasiesddlg
i think you are more of a writer than you think! Much much better than a lot of the commercial titles available on amazon!