[poetry] How about some erotic Haiku?

So I thought it might be fun to put together a collaborative collection of erotic haiku.

For voting and whatnots one poem per comment would be best, I think; also keeping the top level comments as poems? I’ll put a meta comment below as well, for discussion.

Also, while I can’t see any specific rules with regards to this, if you write one in Japanese, it’s probably best to accompany it with an English one with a similar tone and content, or even an outright translation (if you do translate, put both in the same comment).

Finally, since ‘syllable’ is a much more fluid concept in English than in Japanese, don’t feel constricted to strict 5-7-5 in English, since the overall flow and theme is really more important and relevant.

Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/5eotfq/poetry_how_about_some_erotic_haiku