Its always bin my fantasy to walk into a club and hook-up.
Have some drinks (no beer) only hard to relax what you intend on doing.
There are women all over the place some ive seen MUST have a fake ID. Still 18 is legal.
(The mission) she has to have a skirt on. Easy access, ive noticed from my many club scene take home hook-ups.
These chicks dont wear anything. Just a skirt.
Ok next jump into the middle of the dance floor, shake off some amped energy.
Start scoping look around you, up and down scanning the floor to your own vision line.
That way your clear to acttract the lady you will be fucking right there on the dance floor hah
No biggie im smooth and a well indowed player.
I found her!
Through the movement of the crowd, i see a bleach white very short skirt barely covers the bottom of her ass cheek. Dark tanned skin beams off the strobe and disco lights.
Feeling pumped i swoop her from the hips raising her up higher than the crowd.
Damn shes the perfect height must be no more than 5’5″ adding her heels 5’7″
Putting her down we didnt say much but she smirked vicariously, at my bold move.
Continuing to dance another song and a half, i felt the urge rising thru me the sensation, so i flipped her hair back and said.
“You want too try the wildest fantasy this side of no. 5 orange has seen?” she replied ” well i dunno… what is it?” shes deffinetly digging me. So I pitched her my dream and she said ” well since where here” cutting her off slightly ” you look left ill look right ” just as fast as they both cleared the room for bouncers.
“Its clear”
They both repeated, he grabbed her threw her up on his muscular hips. Where she was situated fine.
They commensed a slow pelvic hump, this way she put her hands down below and grabbed Bravo’s pants, tugging the solid shaft. She is so graceful looking down to crack the button open.
Sweet tension built in that short time, we both agreed to connect at the hips.
As the rod came out to salute the sky, she gasped deep with joy.
Bravo jolted forward into her. So deep in the crowd of people, their own essence of time was captured.
No one around just passionate sex for the moments he pursued to make real.
What a thigh slapping good time, no pun intended.
What criticism can you give for next time, to make the story better?
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/56dzim/club_cant_handle_us