I walk into the room. Sitting in his chair…. He demands I sit. There are no chairs, except the one he’s occupying…. I think floor, then I see him stroking his member. I remove my clothes, “Sit Now!” Again, a demand. I want to be his good girl, so I turn, lowering my plump ass into his lap, roughly inserting his cock into my dry cunt, attempting to sit. Feeling the ridges of his exorbitant member, roughly invading my lips. His hand grabs my pony tail, pulling me back, hard. My body takes the lavish assault and I advance down his firm, liberal member, taking all of him into me at once. I almost protest, but I hear his gasp.
“I’m going to be rough and your going to like it!
I begin rubbing my button, as I glide his exquisite cock in and out of my dry cunt. “No,” his words soft, yet firm. He takes both my arms pinning them behind my back. I continue to stroke this cock slowly, up. Then, holding, and finally down. I moan loud as my cunt starts to relax. I start to ride, a steady rock. He orders, “Don’t. Move. Your. Arms.” I continue to rock my hips, griping my own arms, behind me, desperately trying not to move them. I feel his tight grip release, as my shoulders loosen. His arms wrap around my body, still pinning my arms, his chest hair pressed hard against my back. Feeling lips on my neck, at my ear, he nibbles my skin. He inhales deeply, taking in my scent. I rock my hips in a circular motion sometimes fast, then slow. He arches his lap. His massive cock gliding and bumping every inch of my now wet cunt. His squeeze is tight, my chest is struggling to rise under the pressure. I rock faster now, feeling his cock deeper, with each roll of my hips. I’m desperately yearning to touch my clit. Then, He whispers, “STOP!”
I don’t hear his words at first. I continue….
He squeezes me so tight my chest can’t rise and I cease the motions. Realizing… He releases me.
“Knees,” he says, not so softly now. I slide directly to the floor, onto my knees, from his lap. In one swift motion, I spin around, on the ball of one knee. He’s stroking his cock, aiming it toward my mouth. He glides 2 fingers across my lips, inserting them in my mouth. I suck them as hard and long as he allows me. They are so warm and sweet from his resent, self massage. I flip my tongue across the tip of each one. Removing his fingers from my mouth. He guides his hard cock into me, past my lips. The head of his member thrusts over my tongue. Down my throat. I can taste him dripping with each stroke. He removes my pony tail, intertwining my hair in his fingers. Forcing each motion. I suck, encouraging every last drop to enter my mouth. With each downward motion I allow all of him into my, wet, warm, humming throat. I proceed faster. With each rhythm, he presses me deeper. I can feel his member firming up. His breathing is now rapid. He slams my head down and I suck him back up.
I cup his nuts in one hand holding them tight. I wrap my other around the base of his dick. As I suck my way up his cock, my hand follows. I look into his eyes, watching him, he’s staring at me. His cock enters and he holds it deep inside my mouth. Palm across the back of my head, his cock is down my throat. I suck. I hum. Flipping my tongue against his shaft. His warm liquid convulses, I drink him down. Drawing every last drop. His warm liquid flowing, he releases my head and I force him down my throat once more. Still cumming, releasing, exploding. I wait till all twitching stops and lick him, not leaving a drop of his essence behind.
He bends down and kisses my forehead. Strokes my hair. Then, He whispers, “Your turn.”
I await his orders.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/4khehj/awaiting_his_orders_should_i_continue
Yes, continue, but try splitting your writing into paragraphs. Large blocks of text are hard to read and put readers off.
> With paragraphs:
I walk into the room. Sitting in his chair…. He demands I sit. There are no chairs, except the one he’s occupying…. I think floor, then I see him stroking his member. I remove my clothes, “Sit Now!” Again, a demand. I want to be his good girl, so I turn, lowering my plump ass into his lap, roughly inserting his cock into my dry cunt, attempting to sit. Feeling the ridges of his exorbitant member, roughly invading my lips. His hand grabs my pony tail, pulling me back, hard. My body takes the lavish assault and I advance down his firm, liberal member, taking all of him into me at once. I almost protest, but I hear his gasp.
“I’m going to be rough and your going to like it!”
I begin rubbing my button, as I glide his exquisite cock in and out of my dry cunt. “No,” his words soft, yet firm. He takes both my arms pinning them behind my back. I continue to stroke this cock slowly, up. Then, holding, and finally down. I moan loud as my cunt starts to relax. I start to ride, a steady rock. He orders, “Don’t. Move. Your. Arms.” I continue to rock my hips, griping my own arms, behind me, desperately trying not to move them. I feel his tight grip release, as my shoulders loosen. His arms wrap around my body, still pinning my arms, his chest hair pressed hard against my back. Feeling lips on my neck, at my ear, he nibbles my skin. He inhales deeply, taking in my scent. I rock my hips in a circular motion sometimes fast, then slow. He arches his lap. His massive cock gliding and bumping every inch of my now wet cunt. His squeeze is tight, my chest is struggling to rise under the pressure. I rock faster now, feeling his cock deeper, with each roll of my hips. I’m desperately yearning to touch my clit. Then, He whispers, “STOP!”
I don’t hear his words at first. I continue…
He squeezes me so tight my chest can’t rise and I cease the motions. Realizing… He releases me.
“Knees,” he says, not so softly now. I slide directly to the floor, onto my knees, from his lap. In one swift motion, I spin around, on the ball of one knee. He’s stroking his cock, aiming it toward my mouth. He glides 2 fingers across my lips, inserting them in my mouth. I suck them as hard and long as he allows me. They are so warm and sweet from his resent, self massage. I flip my tongue across the tip of each one. Removing his fingers from my mouth. He guides his hard cock into me, past my lips. The head of his member thrusts over my tongue. Down my throat. I can taste him dripping with each stroke. He removes my pony tail, intertwining my hair in his fingers. Forcing each motion. I suck, encouraging every last drop to enter my mouth. With each downward motion I allow all of him into my, wet, warm, humming throat. I proceed faster. With each rhythm, he presses me deeper. I can feel his member firming up.
His breathing is now rapid. He slams my head down and I suck him back up.
I cup his nuts in one hand holding them tight. I wrap my other around the base of his dick. As I suck my way up his cock, my hand follows. I look into his eyes, watching him, he’s staring at me. His cock enters and he holds it deep inside my mouth. Palm across the back of my head, his cock is down my throat. I suck. I hum. Flipping my tongue against his shaft. His warm liquid convulses, I drink him down. Drawing every last drop. His warm liquid flowing, he releases my head and I force him down my throat once more. Still cumming, releasing, exploding. I wait till all twitching stops and lick him, not leaving a drop of his essence behind.
He bends down and kisses my forehead. Strokes my hair. Then, He whispers, “Your turn.”
I await his orders.
> Remember, OP, on Reddit, you need to put a blank line in between paragraphs for it to display correctly.