I just started writing “erotic stories”, Give me ideas and opinions.
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Walking down the school halls, silent, dark. Only able to see the feet I possess. Nobody is around. The unpleasant whistle of the night. I heard a pattern of steps and then suddenly.. A girl, with the most pleasant fragrance of saccharinity walks into me. She just stared at me for what felt like an eternity, Our eyes locked, She was absolutely beautiful. What felt like night was now day. She shined brighter than anything. She smiled at me as I apologised, She just kept on smiling. Before I could get back on my feet, She let out a small giggle, “There’s no need to apologise”, I questioned “What?” and she had already leaped towards me, swinging her arms around me. She began to kiss my neck. It all happened so fast. “What are yo….” she cut me off with a brisk hush putting her finger over my lips. I knew what was going on. I swiped her hand and pinned her against the wall……
I grabbed her thighs and returned the favour, slowly making my way back up to her luscious lips. My hips pushed hers against the wall. I began to slowly move down, neck to shoulder, shoulder to making her moan with excitement. I began slowly rolling up her t-shirt, My hands were on an adventure of their own. I began kissing her stomach, Slowly moving back up to again. I picked her up and laid her on the table, she knew what was coming and couldn’t wait. I began rolling down her stonewashed jeans, kissing like sand falling in. Revealing the lingerie she was dirtily hiding. Groaning over and over, She was not getting any of it. Well until she asked that is…..
She is begging for it, I can tell. She whispers “Amber” softly. I took that was her name. I wrapped my arms around her in search of the straps of her bra, I tore them off, In a flash she let out a small moan as I held her hands above her head beginning lick around her nipples. She had this orgasmic vibe to her, I could tell she loves a good tease. Moving back down, to her waist where the fun begins. I started off by taking off her panties with my teeth, bit by bit on each side, She looked extremely excited when I started to breathe heavy on her, while I massaged her pussy with my tongue. She started twitching, “Please, Im begging you.” she mumbled shyly…
“Rule 1, you always return the favour….”, She jumped off the table and got on her knee’s. As she stared at me undoing my belt. Revealing the beast that was contained, As she started play around with my cock, Her facial expressions were unexplainable, She was beyond ecstatic. I Could tell she was experienced, I held It in as long as I could. Just her staring into my eyes gave me the turn on I needed. I picked her up and nailed her against the table, fucking her from behind. She had a sudden shriek and then let out a tremendous moan….
As I pound her more dense with my voluminous cock, her moaning before the finale. Before I knew it she had already cummed. I didn’t give up. I gave Amber the tease of her life by stopping. She was not expecting anything. I rapidly stuck it back in after she thought it was over, This was no ordinary moan. It was more like a scream yet it sounded like so much pleasure. My objective is to make her cum again before I do. I lifted her up as I laid on the table, placing her on top of me. She was quite light, now that I think about it. Her build is quite small, I’m about half her size. That didn’t change anything. Her tight pussy was glorious, I cannot tell if she is a virgin or not. As she rode me for once, I just couldn’t take it anymore. Letting out a huge moan, She had already be kneeling just asking for my load to be ejected. As it happened she had the monstrous orgasm.
Please tell me what you think :)
-StoryyTimee
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