Does anyone like my short story?

I imagine us first waking up together your head on my chest as I'm slowly rubbing your head I'm sure I would wake up before you do :) then when you wake up we would start with some kisses then run our hands all over each others bodies I would tease you so much until you crave my touch and practical beg to cum then after we have amazing sex we will get up and make breakfast together and have lots of touching all day after breakfast then shower together and get ready for our day we'll go for a walk and some super awesome anything outside and then lunch then more fun in the sun then when it's time for dinner you'll wear a nice sexy dress and I'll dress nicely for you and then whole time while we're out you'll tease me slowly run my hand up your dress while we eat so I can barely touch your sweet little pussy also you'll gently stroke my cock through my pants just to tease me all night until I can't take it then when we get back home we don't make it far into the room before I throw you on the bed on all fours and lift up your dress and start to lick your pussy from behind and suck your clit while slowly fingering your ass until you cum and squirt all over the bed then I stand up and you drop to your knees and start sucking and stroking my cock until I fill your mouth with cum you swallow every drop and then lay back on the bed spread your legs and I kiss from your feet up your legs to your pussy and start to lick your pussy and finger you hard and fast making you cum again then you pull me in and we start kissing as you guide my cock inside you and I start fucking you slow at first so I can feel your pussy squeeze my cock as I go in and out then we fuck hard and fast until I cum inside you then we lay there both in sweat and tired as we cuddle and fall asleep in each others arms

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