My first attempt at erotica! I would love some feedback, and if this is well received I will continue the story. Palace Allure [f] [masturbation].

The familiar web page was clearly designed in an attempt to entice women. The background was a crisp white with a light green pattern, and there was a picture of a large-breasted woman being lovingly caressed by a muscular, shirtless man down the left side of the page. Juliette moved slightly closer, her finger hovering over the mouse button. She ran her tongue across her bottom lip and read the ‘Home’ page.

'Palace Allure – the place where all your sexual fantasies come true! Are you a highly sexual, insatiable person? Do you dream of a place with no sexual taboos where activity is practiced all day every day in the open? Do you like watching and being watched? If you answered ‘Yes!’ Palace Allure is the place for you! Press ‘enter’ to read more.'

Juliette looked over her shoulder despite the fact that she lived alone. This was completely out of character for her. She glanced once more at the fornicating couple and clicked the ‘enter’ button. When the new page loaded she was greeted with an image of the same woman with two different men. The first was dark skinned and shiny with sweat. The woman was on her back, a look of ecstasy on her face, the man’s face buried in her crotch, his arms wrapped around her thighs. The second man was worshipping her large breasts, fondling one with one hand and sucking the other. The woman’s hand was holding his erect penis. Juliette blushed and felt a yearning in her lower abdomen and a tingle in her crotch. She dragged her gaze away from the threesome and scrolled down to the information on Palace Allure.

'Palace Allure is the sex retreat you’ve been waiting for! Come alone, with your partner, or in a group. Our main guest house boasts twenty bedrooms upstairs, all with ensuites. The downstairs is large, open planned living, with a fully functional kitchen, an equipped play room, and a sauna. The Palace is on six acres, and we have many smaller cabins available. We offer a gym, an indoor and outdoor pool, and a large play room outside the main guest house. All areas are open to all guests (with the exception of the private cabins). Clothing is optional in all areas. Sexual activity is welcome and encouraged everywhere and with whoever and however many people you wish! There are no taboos here! With consent, anything you could imagine is welcome!'

Juliette’s blush spread down her chest and she placed a hand on her thigh. This was what she needed and she knew it. Juliette was 24 years old, a personal assistant to the editor of a soft core porn magazine, and a virgin. She did not have a boyfriend, and shared her one bedroom apartment with her white cat, Leo. She had been saving for a holiday since she started her job two years ago and had managed to accumulate just under $18,000. She was prepared to spend it all at Palace Allure.

Juliette scrolled down to the bottom of the page and clicked ‘book now’. She reserved a one bedroom private cabin, and selected her stay for three weeks, starting Monday morning. Once the deposit was payed, she clicked across to another tab she had open on her computer. An online sex store, where she had selected several things for purchase. Six sets of lingerie, stockings and suspenders, three sets of high heels, a vibrator, a double ended dildo, a small and medium butt plug, and a strap-on dildo. She took a deep breath and pressed the ‘check-out now’ button. With express shipping, her order was set to arrive by tomorrow night.

She had already requested her time off work, and for the first time since she got a job, she had more free time than she knew what do to with. She clicked back to the Palace Allure web page and found the page with the image of the threesome. She imagined herself in the woman’s position. Two men pleasuring her, one sucking and licking her clitoris, one running his wet tongue over her erect nipples. She felt her face grow even warmer and the hand that was on her thigh moved up to between her legs. She had fantasised for months about Palace Allure, losing her virginity to a stranger (or strangers) with others watching.

Juliette felt herself getting wet. She leaned back in the desk chair, lifted her dress, and put her hand in her underwear. Her skin was warm and smooth. She slid one finger between her lips and felt the wetness there. Her clitoris pulsed with her slight touch and a small moan escaped from her. Slowly she stroked her clitoris and felt herself growing wetter. Her eyes closed and her back arched. She moved her finger in a circular motion, getting slightly faster every second, her wetness lubricating her finger. When she felt herself getting closer she slowed and let out a deep sigh. She tapped her clitoris three times, and her body shook and she started her circular rubbing again.

She could feel the sweat on her back and the warmth spreading over her legs. She paused from rubbing to slowly insert one finger between her lips inside herself. She gasped and pushed it in again harder. She continued to slide it in and out, running it over the area where she had found her g-spot just a few weeks prior. Her breathing quickened and she began her circular motions again over her swollen clitoris. She felt closer again and slowed down, she opened her eyes and looked at the woman on her screen, naked and spread open. Juliette wanted to be used, she wanted to be taken in front of others. She imagined herself as the woman again, with people watching. Her finger sped up again and she knew that she couldn’t hold off the orgasm much longer. Her eyes closed again and another gasp escaped her lips, her breathing was shallow and quick, her finger covered in her own wetness as she applied more and more pressure.

Juliette’s legs started to twitch and her back spasmed once, twice, three times. She held her finger firmly on her clitoris and felt the waves of pleasure roll over her, she rocked in the chair and let out a single, long moan. Sweat sprouted on her brow and her faced screwed up as the warmth spread throughout her body. Her clitoris continued to pulse and her vagina spasmed, with every clench she felt the pleasure reach right to her toes and fingertips. She released another moan and suddenly her body went slack. Her finger became still and her breathing became even again. She held her finger to her sensitive clitoris for a second and then brought it to her mouth to taste. She liked her own taste, she imagined she would like the taste of other women too. She could hardly wait to try.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/399115/my_first_attempt_at_erotica_i_would_love_some