First time posting, I wrote it for someone who gives me great pleasure
I stand alone in the dimly lit room, the only source of light coming from a single outlet light in the corner, wearing nothing but the collar that my mistress put on me, one that simply says “Owned” on the side. The room itself is warm, and comfortable enough, there is a doggy bed that I can curl up in when it’s time to sleep and some plastic bowls on the floor for drinking and eating. Lastly, a clasp and leash on the wall for when I’ve been bad; I don’t like that part of the room. As I wait for my mistress to have need of me, I couldn’t help but feel stirring in my loins, the thought of pleasing her is simply too fulfilling a thought to not get hard over, it gave me the center to which I anchor my existence. Then I hear the door unlock and open, letting in a stream of light that silhouettes the object of my worship, until she closes the door behind her, bringing the light back down to barely being able to see the object of my desire.
“Hello pet” she says in her wonderfully seductive voice, and by calling me by my true name, she makes me want her more than ever. “Come here” she says, and I as I take a step she adds “On your hands and knees.” I fall to the floor more than happy to please her and crawl to her. “Kneel for me angel” I lean back on my knees looking up at her face, and in the darkness it is just now I realize that she is not wearing any clothes, and my cock responds to this revelation by becoming as hard as a rock. She takes a step forward, nearly standing on top of me, pushing her moist pussy into my face, “Make me cum, pet, and you better not touch yourself until I do.” I lick her lips, tasting her a bit, then concentrate on her beautifully adorable clit, making her moan. This makes my cock throb in response, aching for mistress’ approval. Running my tongue over the completely smooth and hairless expanse of her enchanting pussy, I have to make a conscious effort to keep my hands to stay on my knees where I know she wants them, as she has trained me to know, but I want to touch her so badly. I couldn’t care less about my own cock begging for stimulation. My knees begin to hurt but I force the pain away, I know this is where I need to be, beneath her. I won’t let something as silly as discomfort ruin this perfect moment. I lick her until she is actually dripping on my chin. Then I push my tongue into her, which makes her gasp a final gasp, shooting her juices into my mouth with incredible volume and speed, which I lap up as much as possible, like a good pet.
“Good pet,” she pants, “You’ve earned your reward, lie down.” I lie on the ground so happy that I could please my mistress. She sits on the floor next to me and takes one foot and runs it over the length of my cock. I moan as I feel her soft sole touch my head. She then takes her other foot and uses the leverage to hold my cock in place while she jerks it up and down with both feet. “Cum for me pet” she commands. As soon as she says it, the trigger inside my head goes off and I cum all over her feet. She looks at my relieved face “You are such a good boy” and then she simply gets up and leaves without a word, locking the door behind her. I know that tonight was a good night because my mistress used me to make herself happy, and that is my greatest source of joy.
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/2qibq1/i_love_serving_mistress_fdom_msub_petplay_oral
This is a really sweet point of view. A few grammatical errors (it should be dimly lit room, for example) but nothing major and a nice flow and rhythm for such a short story. Great first effort.
Thank you very much, I tried to get rid of as many errors as I can and I had help.
Nicely written sexy story but I really didn’t like the "object of my worship" and "object of my desire" bits. That part kinda stood out and made me think "wait why is your Mistress an object now?!".
Good point, I will change those in future stories