This is a 100% original story of mine. i wrote it a few years ago but just now decided to post it. please excuse all the punctuation errors and run ons. just read it for the content. thank you please enjoy.
Walking down the hall I hear the water running in the bathroom, the muffled sound of you humming a song, I crack open the door and steam comes rolling out, as I step in my vision is blurred from the water in the air, the heat from the water makes my skin go flush. You weren’t expecting me back this soon, to my benefit. I quietly strip out of my clothes leaving them strewn across the floor. I creep up to the shower and pull the Curtin back slightly I see you facing the foset, hair lathered up singing into a shampoo bottle your eyes are close protecting them from the soap suds I step in behind you moving to that my whole body is touching ours you let out a surprised gasp and turn around where I meet your lips by leaning down and kissing your soapy body slipping against mine as you drape into my arms. The hot water cascading down our body we stand there kissing my hands massaging your slick shoulders and down your shoulder blades kneading your muscles causing you to let out a sigh of relief, kissing the lobe of your ear and I tenderly work down you toned back you thrust towards me involuntary our groins meeting one another’s gliding against one another, your begin to relax more as I work further down your back now kissing and nibbling on your neck you push harder into me my hands eventfully make it to you firm ass where I grasp your cheeks firmly lifting you feet up off the ground you instinctively wrap your long legs around me as I pin you against the shower wall, trapping your hips between me and the wall I grind into you massaging your engorged clit with my pelvious you push back as you long for more. You’re squeezing you legs around me pulling me tighter against you. The soap now out of your hair you look into my eyes attacking me fiercely with your lips in a fashion begging for more. I lower your feet once again to the ground your back now against the flow of water I start kissing down your sun laced skin working not missing an inch I nibble your heat flushed skin slowly lowering myself to my knees paying attention to you now firming nipples you look down and bit your lip grabbing my hair I continue down your smooth stomach now fully kneeling I lift one of your legs up and over so your straddling me, the warm water running down your back side and down your leg as it finds its self on my back moving my mouth around you loins I purse my lips kissing your tender skin softly making you feel it with every nerve ending in your body I work my way around your bikini zone ignoring you swollen slit you grab the back of my head and force my face into you making me kiss and lick your warm lips, my tongue find its way to your clit expertly massaging you making you gasp, you pull me tighter but I push away nibbling on you red lips taking on last long stroke I start low painfully making my way upwards you rolling your hips as you anticipate my tongue leaving your sensitive pussy. You look down at me, your eyebrows arched giving me a grumpy look as I stop going down on you, standing up I lean into you my now stiff rod pushing against your moist lips down between your legs I can feel your heart beat as blood pulses in your throbbing body around my dick, I kiss you once again losing myself as you thrust forward and back meeting my pace as your lips slip around the length of my member still not in you I stop, pulling away. I stop grabbing your hips I turn you around facing you towards the water, you lean over and grab the water facet you whip your hair to the side and look back at me. The water hitting where our boys meet I push into you your mouth is left open is an silent O as I slowly slide into you, stretching out to your limit, ending my first stroke I am fully engulfed by you my knees go weak for a second as I am overwhelmed by pleasure I start my way back out, pulling completely out of you, momentarily leaving you gaping, I push back into you as you lift your hips upwards driving back around me water flowing over our groins it brings the enjoyment to a new level as it flows down your legs I reach around your bent body and rub your ignored clit buckling your knees your ass presses pack against mine forcing me deeper into you the only thing stopping you from falling is my dick buried into you, with my other hand I hold you up picking up my pace I start pounding into you moving my hand at the same pace as I plunder in and out of you, as you regain your strength you start pushing back against me letting go of your hip I grab your hair retracting it towards me making your back bend slowly making you stand up as I’m still in you, we turn I thrust into you pushing your hips up against the wall once again still pulling your hair I angle you head back and to the side as I start whispering your ear groaning as I feel you flex your standing up on your toes you start whimpering I’m going full speed now, losing all pace as I relentlessly slam into you my back being burnt from the hot water, the steam making it hard for us to breath we are gasping, within seconds we meet our match your legs give out gravity giving our assistance as you fall down onto me, I bottom you out, pushing me over the edge I start Cumming into your body as you clamp around me I try to work in and out of you but am unable to because you are squeezing so tight around me, biting your neck as waves of endorphins run through our body’s I finally pull out of you, my arms wrapped around you as water cascades over us, cleansing out defiled body’s as we stand in our afterglow, our arms wrapped round one another you slowly start sudsing up my body massaging me chest as you smile, you bite my pec and look up at me, where you once again go to your toes wobbling as you do so kissing my neck up slowly to my ear whispering to me mmmm that was good, I look down at you, biting your lips cutely I kiss your cheek
Desperately needs formatting.
I think it’s a difficult style of writing, and I’m not sure it’s one that’s good for a large audience. Also you’re write, while I’m not a grammar NAZI some paragraphs would be good.