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VI. SHY NO MORE
As Brian is kissing her neck, Isabel is overcome with tremendous feelings of desire and nervousness. I can't believe this is happening. These guys are both about to have their way with me, and Jon is going to be there watching the whole time. Her body shook at the thought. She felt Marc exploring her thighs, slipping his fingers between her dress and her skin. He slowly slid it up over her body, and she instinctively put her arms up so that he could get it off. Wearing nothing but her tiny black thong, she felt suddenly exposed. But she resisted the urge to cover her breasts with her hands, and instead used those hands to pull Brian's face to her own and kiss him. This is it. Now, it's time to let go.
She rubbed Brian's dick again through his pants as they kissed. This thing is huge. I want to taste it so bad. Probably sensing her urgency, Brian placed a hand on her shoulder and motioned for her to sit down. Marc got off the bed and stood at Brian's side.
"You know what to do," urged Brian.
Yes, yes I do. I just can't believe I'm actually about to do it. She spent a few seconds undoing their pants and exposing their dicks. Brian's was as big as it felt. Easily eight inches, as thick as her wrist, and ramrod straight. Marc's was nearly as big, and had a slight downward curve to it. She was pleased by the contrast between Brian's dark skin and Marc's light.
She turned to Brian first, cupping his balls with one hand and stroking his shaft with the other. She took the head of his cock into her mouth and sucked on it softly at first, still amazed by it's size. She tried to take more of his length into her mouth, but gagged before she had even reached the halfway point. I've never been good at deepthroating. Maybe I should practice. She contented herself with bobbing back and forth along the length that she could handle.
Not wanting Marc to feel left out, she started to stroke his dick with one hand while she sucked Brian. Then, she switched to sucking Marc's cock and stroking Brian's. Marc's wasn't as thick, so she could take more of it in. Still, it was pretty big. Definitely bigger than Jon's. My jaw is going to be sore after tonight. She alternated between them for a few more minutes.
"Lay back on the bed," ordered Brian. She complied, releasing their dicks and sliding back onto the bed. While she was on her back, Brian hooked her thong with his fingers and pulled it down off her body, exposing her pretty, neatly trimmed pussy. "God, Isabel, you're dripping wet already. Just the way I like it." Yeah, and I have been for hours now. I hope he likes my pussy.
Brian left little doubt in her head about just how much he liked her pussy. He began first by kissing the insides of her thighs. Just getting her ready for the real treat. He then started licking her whole pussy up and down, nice and slow. "You taste so fucking good," he said between licks. Then, he buried his face in her pussy, licking and sucking aggressively, as if he were trying to make out with it. Oh my god, this feels so fucking good. Yes. Yes! She threw her head back and closed her eyes, really trying to take in all of the pleasure that she was feeling.
Her pleasureable concentration was broken when she felt Marc climb onto the bed near her head. But she didn't much mind. She knew exactly what he wanted, and she was more than happy to give it to him. She opened her mouth and received his cock once again, eagerly sucking and stroking it while Brian licked her pussy. This is almost too good to believe. Is this a dream? Just then, she felt rhythmic surges of ecstasy crashing through her body, making her convulse and spasm uncontrollably. Nope, definitely not a dream.
While she was focused on sucking Marc's cock, she felt Brian shift his weight and kneel in front of her. He teased her pussy with his cock, sliding it up and down between her lips. This is it. I hope I can handle this. Then, he pushed his cock into her slowly, inch by inch. Fuck, that's a big dick. He pumped her slowly at first, allowing her to feel every bit of his length. Then, he grabbed her by the waist and fucked her hard and fast. Her small tits bounced around wildly as he took her. She could handle his size, but only just barely. Much more of this and he might actually split me in two.
After a few minutes, Brian pulled out of her and stood at the foot of the bed. "Get on all fours and suck me," he commanded. Isabel remembered how much she'd enjoyed tasting herself earlier at the club. And now, I get to lick my pussy off of his dick. She crawled up to his dick and eagerly cleaned it for him, rubbing her lips and tongue all along his shaft. Fuck, I do taste good. I kinda wish i could go down on myself right now.
She felt Marc push two fingers into her pussy and tease her G-spot. She didn't expect what he did next, though. She felt his tongue against her asshole, licking and trying to poke its way in. It was a strange feeling. Nobody has ever licked my ass before. But I think I like it. She focused on relaxing her muscles a bit, which allowed him to actually fuck her ass with his tongue. She enjoyed the feeling of his tongue squirming around in her ass, and it didn't take long for her legs to start trembling. Okay yes, now I'm sure I like it. Fuck, that feels good.
Marc pushed his cock into Isabel and immediately started to fuck her wildly. The slapping from his hips slamming into her curvaceous ass echoed throughout the room. Yes. Yes, give it to me. He grabbed her hips and fucked her as hard as she could. It actually hurt her quite a bit. Ahh, but it feels so fucking good. Give me that pleasure mixed with pain. It's what I need.
She'd nearly forgotten about the reason she was able to enjoy this moment in the first place. She glanced over at Jon, just to see how was reacting to it all. To her surprise, he had already pulled his dick out and was stroking it with vigor. The way he bit his lip as he looked over the scene told her all she needed to know about his state of mind. He's going crazy over there. And in a good way. Is that what it feels like to be desired? To have three men lusting after you at once? She considered it for a moment. Yes, I guess it must be. These three men are aroused, coming to climax, because of me. It feels so good to be desired.
Brian pulled his cock out of her mouth and laid on the bed. Marc gave isabel one more hard thrust and pulled his dick out as well.
"Now, it's your time to shine," said Brian. "Hop up here on this dick and go crazy."
The sight of his eight inches, hard as iron and towering into the air above the bed, intimidated her. But she saw the length more as a challenge than as a threat. Cowgirl was one thing she knew she was good at. At least, Jon always loved it. He can never take it for more than a few minutes without cumming. I guess all of those belly-dancing and salsa lessons I had when I was young really paid off. She mounted Brian and slowly lowered herself down onto his dick until it was buried to the hilt inside her pussy. All right. Time to give him all that he can handle.
She was almost startled by how full she felt, but she pressed on. She moved up and down slowly for a few strokes, adjusting to the length and girth of Brian's cock. Fuck, this thing is huge. But before long, she was bouncing up and down on it wildly. Her ass slapped hard against his hips.
Brian's eyes widened. He seemed surprised that Isabel was so adept at riding. He grabbed her hips and held on for dear life. "Fuck yeah. Ride this dick, Isabel."
She planted her hands on his chest and bucked her hips as wildly as she could manage, channeling her inner salsa dancer. His dick slid easily in and out of her as her ass rocked and her hips rolled. I'm gonna make you cum, Brian. Cum for me, sexy stranger. And it didn't take long for his body to give way. He threw his head back and moaned loudly. His body convulsed and she felt him fire a hot load deep inside her. With every convulsion of his body, more and more of his seed filled her. She rolled her hips around on his dick slowly as his cum oozed out of her. That's right, Brian. I took you there. I made you cum.
Marc stood on the bed near Isabel, and her sexual instincts took over. I'm still hungry. Give me that cock, Marc. I'm gonna make you cum too. She grabbed his dick and plunged it into her mouth. She tried and failed to deepthroat it, only managing to gag on it. But she didn't care. She sucked his dick enthusiastically, almost enjoying the gagging.
"Oh my god, yes. I'm gonna cum," muttered Marc. She went down as far as she could on his cock and let him shoot into her mouth and down her throat. His load was huge, and the excess dripped out of her mouth and onto her chest. She felt like a sex goddess, sultry and powerful. After she was finished swallowing his load, she rolled off of Brian's dick onto the bed next to him. With her eyes closed and her body drained, all she could do was show a weak smile. *Fucked by two sexy strangers and filled to the brim with their cum. This has been one of the best nights ever. Does it have to end? *
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