What do you guys think of my first story? [mf] [bj] [piv] [oral]

The best kind of foreplay is the kind that starts hours in advance, without even touching each other. Texts with suggesting words, a winking face here and there, maybe a compliment or two.

I had the house to myself for the weekend and I was anxious to have a bit of fun with Iann, the guy that always knew how to turn me on, even if it was with just his words. He was busy most of the afternoon, but that gave me time to prepare for our evening together. Between the "I can't wait to see you tonight, baby." and "Do you know how sexy you are to me?" texts, I made sure my bed was made, my blacklight was in working order and my body was perfect.

I showered, singing and dancing, moving my hips and feeling the warm water run down my completely exposed body as I usually do. I had just enough of my favorite orange creamcicle scented body soap left to lather up, gliding my hands over my chest, along my sides and over my ass before rinsing off, wrapping up in a towel and sending him a quick picture, just so he knew what to look forward to.

After blowing my hair dry and putting it up in a high ponytail, perfect for him to pull, I playfully bounced back into my room, completely naked and put on my lacey, black bra and underwear, along with dark, thigh high stockings with garters and a little bow at the top of each one. There wasn't much of a point to putting these on, as I knew that he would just tear them off of me the second he got the chance. The thought of him being so animalistic, so rough with me was an absolute turn on.

I knew he'd be over soon and I was getting more excited by the minute. I even almost forgot two more touches to my outfit that I knew would make it perfect. I wrapped a leather collar with a heart shaped padlock in the back around my neck and locked it with the little key. I kept that in my hand as I dug around my desk before finally finding a highlighter and writing "Cumslut" on my lower stomach. It was completely invisible in this lighting. Perfect. As soon as I re-capped the marker, I heard a knock on the door.

I opened my front door and pulled him in, closing the door behind us. I stood on my tiptoes to kiss him, a shocked expression was still on his face. I gestured towards my barely covered body and asked, "What do you think?" Before giggling and kissing him again. This time, I made sure it lasted much longer. As I pulled back, I grabbed his right hand, slipping the key to my collar into it and whispered in his ear, "I'm all yours tonight."

He grinned at me and surprised me by picking me up bridal style, carrying me up the stairs and into my room. After gently letting me down on my feet, he turned off the lights, which simultaneously turned on my black lights. He saw what was written on my stomach and asked, "Cumslut, huh? We'll see about th—."

Before he could finish his sentence, he was already pushing me back onto my bed and taking his shirt off. He ran his hand against the back of my neck and held my head as he laid on top of me, kissing me deeply and passionately. Closing my eyes, I felt him breath lightly in my ear before kissing down my neck, biting it, then going back up to my lips. Back and forth, he kissed, bit and left light red marks along each side of my neck. He pulled my bra down and lightly sucked on my nipples, earning a quiet moan from me. He looked at me, smiled and unhooked my bra in the back and together, we fumbled to get it off.

He explored my body with his tongue, his lips, his fingertips. Slowly moving down, he was teasing me. I could feel myself getting more wet by the second. Finally, I felt him rub the outside of my underwear and I smiled. He pushed them to the side and slipped a finger into me, making me gasp. The clothing was in the way and we were both getting tired of it, so he pulled them down and off completely. I spread my legs further as he kneeled in front of me, this time putting two fingers in me. I was getting anxious and I wanted his tongue and lips on me.

Finally, he pulled his fingers out and grabbed me by my hips and drug me closer to him before he used his tongue to swirl around my clit. In his extremely sexy voice, he said, "I love how you taste." That turned me on even more. He kept sucking and nibbling, making me whimper with each movement. I was getting louder by the minute and he got more aggressive with me. Yet again, he pushed his fingers into me while still licking and sucking my clit. My back arched and my nails dug into his arm as I moaned and whimpered, begging for more. He went faster and I was almost screaming by this point. Finally, I could feel myself tense up and push myself deeper into his face as I came, moaning the entire time.

I pulled him up and kissed him, just so I could taste myself on his lips. Still slightly shaking from the amazing orgasm he gave me, I rolled both of us over and this time, I moved downwards on him. Struggling to unbutton his jeans, I told him that I couldn't wait to have his cock in my mouth. I finally managed to get it out and as soon as I did, I licked him up and down, looking in his eyes and using my hand along with my mouth. I took as much of him into my mouth as I could, quickly moving up and down, he told me to go faster. So I stroked him with my hand as I swirled my tongue around the tip. Neither one of us could take it anymore.

"I need you to fuck me. Now." I said, as we changed positions. I got on my hands and knees with my ass in the air, waiting for him to enter me. I love the feeling of the first thrust and when it happened, I gasped. Right away, he went hard, pounding me and using me as his little toy. His hand was wrapped in my hand in my hair, pulling harder and harder. His dick was a little too big for me and it hurt, but a little pain is never a bad thing, is it? I was loud. Moaning, screaming his name, whimpering in ecstasy. I could hear his low growls, "You're all mine." Gah, he's so sexy. I knew he was about to finish, so I crawled off of him and used my hand to jack him off. With a quiet groan from him, he came all over me. In my mouth, on my face, all over my tits.. As he laid back down, I used my fingers to move most of it into my mouth, loving every bit. I just smiled and decided I should probably go wash up.

We had more fun later, but that's another story for another day (;

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/1ot1s0/what_do_you_guys_think_of_my_first_story_mf_bj